Saw some of the drawings I hadn't seen before on yr site - but also saw this one - which is very good - and full of expectations.
I can see the trouble you've been having with it and the overpainting - but if can step back from it a little - it has a bit of magic on the quiet - again the intersting dislocations of the green world - and importantly the 'isolated figure' sitting with back toward the viewer....in a space of its own almost. I like it a lot - it looks less 'tryhard' than some others, and all the better for it - titles good too. cheers. Dai
PS - Untitled 300 from yr website also looks interesting
